- To join two independent clauses. You can use a semicolon like a period to join two independent clausesPart of a sentence that contains a subject and a predicate and can stand on its own as a complete sentence. Example independent clause: The boy ate the freshly picked apple with delight. The subject is the boy, the predicate is the verb ate, plus the modifiers the freshly picked apple with delight.; however, unlike a period, do not capitalizeTo use capital letters. the first letter of the second independent clause unless it is a proper nounThe name of a person place or thing. Proper nouns should be capitalized. Examples: person: George Washington; place: The White House; thing: The Washington Monument..
For example:
Writing is difficult work; it requires much time and effort.
Good writers write multiple drafts of the same essay; furthermore, they always proofread an essay before they turn it in.
- With conjunctive adverbs. Also use a semicolon before conjunctive adverbsA type of parenthetical expression; adverbs that join ideas together. Examples: also, first, however, next.—e.g., moreover, however, and nevertheless—if there is an independent clause on either side of the conjunctive adverb.
Here is a list of some conjunctive adverbs:
accordingly | finally | meanwhile | similarly |
also | furthermore | moreover | specifically |
anyway | hence | nevertheless | still |
besides | however | next | subsequently |
certainly | indeed | nonetheless | then |
consequently | instead | now | therefore |
conversely | likewise | otherwise | thus |
For example:
It is wise to finish your homework immediately; however, for procrastinators, this is easier said than done.
In the example above, the semicolon is necessary because there is a complete thought on either side of the conjunctive adverb. Note that conjunctive adverbs also require a comma after them.
Procrastinators, however, can change their ways.
In this example, a semicolon is not used because there is not an independent clause on either side of the conjunctive adverb. In this case, you should encase the conjunctive adverb in commas.
- To delineate items in a list when the items already contain a comma. Generally, commas are used to separate three or more items in a series; however, when the items in the series already contain a comma, it is more effective to separate the items with semicolons. This avoids confusion.
For example:
The following sentenceA group of words, phrases, or clauses that expresses a complete thought. A complete sentence has these characteristics: a capitalized first word, a subject and a predicate, and end punctuation, such as a period (.), question mark (?), or exclamation mark (!). is unclear. See if you can tell if the group has four members or eight.
Incorrect: The group included Mr. King, the president, Ms. Kennedy, the vice president, Mr. Green, the secretary, and Mrs. Brown, the treasurer.
Now see how the sentence looks with semicolons in the list.
Correct: The group included Mr. King, the president; Ms. Kennedy, the vice president; Mr. Green, the secretary; and Mrs. Brown, the treasurer.
By adding semicolons to the sentence, the writer's meaning is clearer. The semicolons separate the people with their titles, so the reader can tell there are four people in the group.
- Before a series of items. Use a colon when you want to introduce a list. Be sure that an independent clause precedes the colon. The colon should not split an independent clause. Additionally, do not use a colon directly after words like including, included, and such as.
For example:
Correct: I went to the store and bought a number of items: bananas, bread, chicken, lettuce, and ice.
In this sentence, I went to the store and bought a number of items is an independent clause, so a colon precedes the list.
Incorrect: I went to the store and bought: bananas, bread, chicken, lettuce, and ice.
I went to the store and bought is not an independent clause, so a colon should not precede the list.
Incorrect: I went to the store and bought all I needed, including: bananas, bread, chicken, lettuce, and ice.
A colon should not be used after including.
Another example:
Correct: To apply for the job, I needed the following items: a completed application, cover letter, resume, and list of references.
To apply for the job, I needed the following items is an independent clause, so a colon precedes the list.
Incorrect: To apply for the job, I needed: a completed application, cover letter, resume, and list of references.
To apply for the job, I needed is not an independent clause, so a colon should not precede the list.
Another example:
Correct: My teacher posted all the materials we needed to complete our assignment, including a guideline sheet, a citation guide, and a rubric.
No colon is needed after including.
Incorrect: My teacher posted all the materials we needed to complete our assignment, including: a guideline sheet, a citation guide, and a rubric.
A colon should not be used after including.
- Between an independent clause and an explanation, rule, or example. Use a colon when the second independent clause explains or otherwise fills in information raised in the first independent clause.
For example:
Now that your flowers are wilting, you can see what I mean: the summers here are far too warm.
The summers here are far too warm gives more information about what the speaker is referring to when he says you can see what I mean. The colon is placed before the explanation that gives more information about the first clause.
- Before a quote. You can use a colon to introduce a quote, especially a block quoteA copy of a long section of a text or speech, set off from the rest of a text. Block quotations, like direct quotations, are exact repeats of wording, but because of their length they are indented or printed in a different font rather than placed inside quotation marks. of more than three or four lines.
For example:
One can understand how cold it was from Hart's words: "The snow clung to the smallest twigs of every tree" (37).
Since there are better ways of introducing shorter quotes, it is more common to use a colon to introduce longer quotes.
In his journal, Hart paints a vivid portrait of the storm:
The snow clung to the smallest twigs of every tree, and a thousand patterns of lace arrayed themselves against the night sky. It lay heaped up over tree roots like mounds of whipped cream and trimmed the back fence in unfurled rows of white silk ribbons (37).
There are other uses for the colon that are less common, such as:
- Before a subtitleA secondary part of a title, which often provides explanation or identifies different parts of a series. Example: The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey. Use a colon to separate the title from the subtitle.
For example:
CSI: SVU
Star Trek: The Next Generation
Lean In: Women, Work, and the Will to Lead
- After the salutation of a business letter. In a personal letter, you follow your salutationA greeting, such as Dear John or To whom it may concern at the beginning of a letter. (e.g. "Dear Tom") with a comma. A business letter, however, requires a colon.
For example:
To whom it may concern:
Dear Ms. Saunders:
To the hiring manager:
When incorporating dates, addresses, or portions of an address in your writing, it is important to know how to punctuate them correctly. Here are some rules to remember.
- Do not use a comma between the month and the day of the month.
For example:
Incorrect: My son was born on April, 5.
Correct: My son was born on April 5.
- Commas are not used when only a month and a year are stated.
For example:
Incorrect: My son was born in April, 2009.
Correct: My son was born in April 2009.
- In addresses, commas are always used between a city and its state, and the state is followed by a comma unless it appears at the end of a sentence.
For example:
Incorrect: The conference is in Boston Massachusetts, which will probably be snowy at that time of the year.
Correct: The conference is in Boston, Massachusetts, which will probably be snowy at that time of the year.
- Do not use commas following cities when they are used alone. The same applies to states when used alone.
For example:
Incorrect: The conference is in Boston, and will probably be full, so it's best to register early.
Correct: The conference is in Boston and will probably be full, so it's best to register early.
- When writing street addresses, use commas after the street address and between the city and state abbreviation, but not between the state abbreviation and the zip code.
For example:
Incorrect: My new address is 52 Camilla Lane San Jose CA 95124.
Correct: My new address is 52 Camilla Lane, San Jose, CA 95124.
- Commas are used in dates between the day of the week; the month and day of the month; and the year. The exception to placing a comma after an address is when it is at the end of a sentence.
For example:
Incorrect: My son was born on Sunday April 5 2009 in Grand Junction Colorado, where we lived at the time.
Correct: My son was born on Sunday, April 5, 2009, in Grand Junction, Colorado, where we lived at the time.
In the corrected sentence, commas appear after the day of the week (Sunday), the month and the day of the year (April 5) and the year (2009) as well as a city (Grand Junction) and state (Colorado).
Colons and semicolons are tools that can improve and enhance your writing in college and in your career. For example, by using colons and semicolons to vary your sentence structure and rhythm, you can make your writing more engaging. Also, they fulfill specific functions in research, technical, and business writing: semicolons can clarify lists by separating items that contain commas, and colons can introduce lists, set up quotations, and punctuate salutations in cover lettersA letter that is sent along with a resume that provides context and more information for the reader. and other professional communications.
Using commas with dates and addresses correctly is a small way to develop credibilityDescribes a person who is trusted and able to be believed; reliable. with your readers, including professors, colleagues, and bosses. Additionally, readers rely on the commas to identify the separate elements of an address, which is especially helpful when it is an unfamiliar address.
Review the examples below that incorrectly use (or do not use) colons, semicolons, and commas. Note the explanation and correction that follows each example.
- He wanted to skip the party nevertheless, he decided to go.
Add a semicolon before nevertheless. A semicolon should be used before a conjunctive adverb that separates two independent clauses.
Correct: He wanted to skip the party; nevertheless, he decided to go.
- Their home services include: plumbing, heating, and air conditioning.
Delete the colon. A colon should not be used after include.
Correct: Their home services include plumbing, heating, and air conditioning.
- On Saturday April 30 1803 the United States signed a treaty with France, which we now refer to as the Louisiana Purchase.
Add a comma after the day of the week, the numbered day of the month, and after the year.
Correct: On Saturday, April 30, 1803, the United States signed a treaty with France, which we now refer to as the Louisiana Purchase.
- The best sandwiches are peanut butter and jelly, bacon, lettuce, and tomato, and ham and cheese.
Replace the commas after jelly and tomato with semicolons. Semicolons should be used to separate items in a list if some items contain commas.
Correct: The best sandwiches are peanut butter and jelly; bacon, lettuce, and tomato; and ham and cheese.
- The smell of the ocean filled my nose I began to relax.
Add a semicolon after nose. A semicolon can be used to join two independent clauses.
Correct: The smell of the ocean filled my nose; I began to relax.
- The cat never stirred indeed, it is still sleeping now.
Add a semicolon before indeed. A semicolon should be used before a conjunctive adverb that separates two independent clauses.
Correct: The cat never stirred; indeed, it is still sleeping now.
- I was born in Portland Maine but my family moved to Portland Oregon when I was five.
Add a comma between the cities and states and after the states.
Correct: I was born in Portland, Maine, but my family moved to Portland, Oregon, when I was five.
- For the camp supper, we prepared: macaroni and cheese, potato salad, and watermelon.
Delete the colon. For the camp supper, we prepared is not an independent clause.
Correct: For the camp supper, we prepared macaroni and cheese, potato salad, and watermelon.
- I got my candy I was happy.
Add a semicolon after candy. A semicolon can be used to join two independent clauses.
Correct: I got my candy; I was happy.
- Please forward my mail to 20 Circle Drive, Burlington NJ, 08016.
Add a comma between the city and the state, and delete the comma between the state abbreviation and the zip code.
Correct: Please forward my mail to 20 Circle Drive, Burlington, NJ 08016.
- I hoped to avoid the downside of canoe trips tipping, getting wet, and being cold.
Add a colon after trips. A colon can be used after an independent clause to introduce a list.
Correct: I hoped to avoid the downside of canoe trips: tipping, getting wet, and being cold.
- I knew it would break eventually it was poorly made to begin with.
Add a semicolon after eventually. A semicolon can be used to join two independent clauses.
Correct: I knew it would break eventually; it was poorly made to begin with.
- We packed a picnic lunch, including: sandwiches, chips, and cookies.
Delete the colon. A colon should not be used after including.
Correct: We packed a picnic lunch, including sandwiches, chips, and cookies.
- Some people believed that the ancient Mayan calendar predicted the world would end in December, 2012.
Delete the comma. A comma should not be used between a month and year.
Correct: Some people believed that the ancient Mayan calendar predicted the world would end in December 2012.
Read the sentences below and correct them, adding or deleting a semicolon, colon, or comma as necessary. Be sure to explain your reasoning.
- She sat by the fire for hours still, she couldn't get warm.
Add a semicolon after hours. A semicolon should be used before a conjunctive adverb that separates two independent clauses.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: She sat by the fire for hours; still, she couldn't get warm.
- We loaded up everything into the car, including: the tent, sleeping bags, and the camping stove.
Delete the colon. A colon should not be used after including.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: We loaded up everything into the car, including the tent, sleeping bags, and the camping stove.
- Following the attack on Pearl Harbor, Franklin D. Roosevelt declared December 7 1941 "a date which will live in infamy" in his speech to Congress in Washington D.C.
Add a comma after the day of the month and the year. Also add a comma after the city.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: Following the attack on Pearl Harbor, Franklin D. Roosevelt declared December 7, 1941, "a date which will live in infamy" in his speech to Congress in Washington, D.C.
- I wanted a soda, a burger with mayo, ketchup, and cheese, and fries.
Replace the commas after soda and cheese with semicolons. Semicolons should be used to separate items in a list if some items contain commas.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: I wanted a soda; a burger with mayo, ketchup, and cheese; and fries.
- We expected snow we were disappointed.
Add a semicolon after snow. A semicolon can be used to join two independent clauses.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: We expected snow; we were disappointed.
- On January 26, 2009 Nadya Suleman gave birth to eight children.
Add a comma after the year because the date uses a comma.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: On January 26, 2009, Nadya Suleman gave birth to eight children.
- He thought he had closed the door instead, it swung open before him.
Add a semicolon after door. A semicolon should be used before a conjunctive adverb that separates two independent clauses.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: He thought he had closed the door; instead, it swung open before him.
- To help him clean his car, I bought: rags, soap, and wax.
Delete the colon. To help him clean his car, I bought is not an independent clause.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: To help him clean his car, I bought rags, soap, and wax.
- I am getting married on September, 22.
Delete the comma. Do not separate the month and the day of the month with a comma.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: I am getting married on September 22.
- The creek used to freeze every winter now, it rarely does.
Add a semicolon after winter. A semicolon should be used before a conjunctive adverb that separates two independent clauses.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: The creek used to freeze every winter; now, it rarely does.
- She expected to see him there he'd promised to come.
Add a semicolon after there. She expected to see him there and he'd promised to come are both independent clauses.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: She expected to see him there; he'd promised to come.
- Please add the following toppings walnuts, raisins, and coconut.
Add a colon after toppings. A colon can be used after an independent clause to introduce a list.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: Please add the following toppings: walnuts, raisins, and coconut.
- Last summer, I moved from Bozeman, Montana to Park City, Utah.
Add a comma after Montana since the address uses a comma.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: Last summer, I moved from Bozeman, Montana, to Park City, Utah.
- The children were instructed to bring: tissues, soap, and hand sanitizer.
Delete the colon. The children were instructed to bring is not an independent clause.
Write the correct sentence.
Correct: The children were instructed to bring tissues, soap, and hand sanitizer.
What are some situations in which you might want to include a semicolon and colon in your writing?
I might use a colon to introduce a list, or I might use a semicolon to divide a statement from its explanation. These elements help clarify my writing and allow me to vary my writing to make it more interesting.
Why do you need to know how to use commas in dates and addresses?
If I punctuate an address incorrectly, I run the risk of someone not knowing where I am talking about. Additionally, if a reader uses that address to mail a letter or package, it may not get to the intended destination if they cannot understand the address.